Chapter 196
He admitted directly, the corners of his mouth curled up unconsciously.
This sentence made everyone stand in awe.
Girls who have experienced it know how strong the malice is in "Summer Comes Again" and "Steins;Gate".
Now it seems that it might be above that!
"Senior is so scary!"
Ishiroyu said without any acting skills.
271 Arrangement of comics and novels
Just when the discussion about the new work is in full swing. The sequel to the previous work "Steins Gate" of "Moonlight is Beautiful" is also gradually getting on the right track.
Although it is not a complete sequel to "The Moon Is Beautiful", it is his script. It may miss some readers, but it will not have a big impact.
The reputation of "Eri Kashiwagi" is no longer as good as "Moonlight is Beautiful", but the potential traffic in the comic industry is greater than that of the light novel industry, so after a period of publicity, "Steins;Gate 0" soon became available It entered the top ten of the serialized comics magazine and continued to improve as time went by.
"Hachiman, how is the rhythm of this sentence?"
After finishing a new chapter of the comic, Yinglili had a conversation with him via video.
"Okay, you have gradually grasped the rhythm."
After reading it, Hikigaya Hachiman gave a simple evaluation.
The experience of being a comic book artist, apart from fame, does not provide much help to a young girl, especially when drawing a serious comic.
So once she got started, the girl never had enough grasp of the plot to be able to control it freely. Of course, his guest role in the original work was to provide guidance.
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Although he has never drawn comics, he has a very precise grasp of the plot. After a little adaptation, he found the right rhythm and used it to teach the other party.
"Great, I thought I could never change... If I had known better, I wouldn't have drawn the book."
Yingli wiped the sweat from her forehead.
What she once relied on became her own obstacle, which gave her a great headache.
"Thankfully, Hachiman, you helped me. Otherwise, I feel like I will never be able to fulfill my dream."
She looked serious.
"It's too early to say this now. It's not that simple if you want to create satisfactory comics by yourself."
Hikigaya Hachiman said alertly.
"Ah, I got carried away without paying attention! Ahem, I do still have a long way to go! Next, I need to learn more about story creation from you, Hachiman, please continue to spur me on!"
Yinglili's expression changed instantly. She had always been very serious in this regard.
"Okay, let's talk today about how to create a character who is annoying but acceptable."
He nodded.
One night a few days later.
"Hey, teacher, if I had known I would have gone to university in Chiba, the effect of personal guidance would have been better, right?"
Sitting at the desk, facing the computer, Kasumigaoka Shiyu sighed.
"No, there is no difference at all. It mainly depends on personal understanding."
Listening to her joke, Hikigaya Hachiman denied her statement.
"Look, isn't Mr. Yamada's progress not as great as yours? We are together every day."
What he wants to express is that the master leads you through the door, and cultivation depends on the individual.
"We're together every day... Humph!"
However, Kasumigaoka Shiyu understood another layer of meaning from his expression.
Is this asking someone to eat dog food?
Consider the mood of the female apprentice!
"So, when will your new work be released? It's been a long time coming. Your readers can't wait, right?"
Hikigaya Hachiman changed the subject instantly.
"I have long wanted to write a new novel, but every time I finish writing the outline, I end up deleting it. I have no choice but to lose interest as soon as I see the works of Teacher Ke'er and Teacher Qianju..."
Kasumigaoka Shiu stirred the spoon in the coffee cup with one hand and answered lazily.
"Really, really, how can there be such a genius in the world? It's unbearable! Damn, damn, I really want to surpass you!"
The girl's resentment filled her ears.
"So, do you want to continue polishing?"
He said 'hmm'.
"No, it's better not to use it."
The girl shook her head again.
"Only theory without practice is impossible to succeed. This is the limit that I can reach at this stage. At this time, I'd better write a work first, so that I can see more of my shortcomings."
"Then I wish your new work a bestseller."
"Arigado, teacher."
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As the season enters summer, the weather is gradually getting hotter, and everyone's clothing is gradually becoming cooler.
"Tick-tock-tock..."
Unexpectedly, it suddenly started raining before I went out today.
"Hey, you all bring your umbrellas and don't do the same trick to me again!"
Yamada Fairy's warning gaze meant something.
"You're being too lenient, Yaren."
Senjumura Zheng responded.
"It's rare that it starts to rain in the morning. Senior, let's hold an umbrella with me and go to school."
But Nayuta had already rushed towards him at this time, holding his arm and saying coquettishly.
"It's better to separate. I have become a public enemy of the school. I'm afraid if this irritation continues, someone will come after me."
Hikigaya Hachiman shook his head numbly.
In the school, a certain rumor has become everyone's consensus. Now he is a scumbag who plays with girls' hearts, and there is a risk of being slapped.
Although he admitted that he was stepping on a few boats, he really didn't play with girls' hearts, and he really planned to take responsibility to the end!
All this is slander from those people!
"It does sound possible to become a reality... This must be a problem for some people. They don't behave themselves all day long and get close to someone else's fiancé!"
Yamada Fairy spread his hands, half-opened one eye, and teased.
"It's so pathetic to be obsessed with your own fantasies, demi-human."
Qian Shou Village's Zheng looked at her with contempt.
But Nayuta suddenly thought of something and fell silent.
After the goblin had quarreled with the village for a while.
"It's time to go... If you are late again because of this kind of thing, you won't be able to punch in enough."
Hikigaya Hachiman observed Nayuta, then looked away and said.
It seemed to be because of the weather, the gloomy sky outside made the atmosphere in the club a bit dull.
At the fifth watch, Liuli looked left and right, but stopped talking.
Qian Shou Cun Zheng is still immersed in his work as always.
Saori Makishima reads novels like an outsider.
The problem is obviously...
night.
Hikigaya Hachiman took advantage of the goblin to cook dinner in the kitchen and sneaked in to talk to her about it.
"Huh? You're saying that there's something wrong with Nayuta's condition?"
Tapping his chin with his finger, the Yamada fairy looked thoughtful.
"Is it possible that girls will have this every month..."
he suddenly proposed.
"It's not impossible..."
Miss Goblin blushed.
"However, we still need to pay more attention to Mr. Crab's condition next."
"Um."
272 A magical girl who fits the stereotype?
After answering the last big question, the brown-haired girl sitting in the classroom turned the penholder with her right hand, looking absent-minded.
"Hurry up, I really want tomorrow to come soon!"
Kosaka Kirino was very anxious at the moment.
Today is Friday, the last day of exams, and tomorrow is the day when "Puella Magi Madoka Magica" is released.
Among many people, her expectations must be the highest. After all, apart from her, no one she knows still cares about magical girls.
After all, in the eyes of most people, it is a very childish work.
Of course, her requirements are also the highest!
She has basically read all the magical girl-themed works in recent years without missing a single one. With her understanding of magical girls, it can be said that no one can match them.
"So, what will the magical girl written by Teacher Tsukoshi look like?"
Kosaka Kirino thought with expectation.
But as she thought about it, her expression became much more solemn, so that after school, Aragaki Ayase had a misunderstanding when he saw her expression.
"Kirino, your expression is a little ugly. Is it because you didn't perform well in the exam?"
"No, the exam is very simple. I can handle it casually. What I'm worried about is tomorrow..."
Kosaka Kirino shook his head repeatedly.
"Are you worried that Hikigaya-senpai's new work will be ignored? But I don't think so. Senior is very confident. With his current status in the industry, he shouldn't make mistakes in judgment, right?"
Aragaki Ayase's eyes flashed.
"I'm not worried about this. What I'm worried about is Teacher Yueze's unique interpretation... I'm afraid it will exceed my expectations."
Kosaka Kirino said with rapid breathing.
Because she had been fooled twice, and each time was more painful than the last, she had to be wary.
"Indeed, you need to be mentally prepared to read Teacher Yuese's novels..."
For a moment, Aragaki Ayase recalled the fear of being dominated, and her heart trembled.
In the early morning, when the sky is still bright.
"Dong dong dong."
Arriving on the second floor, Sayuri Sawamura knocked on her daughter's door, but found no one responded.
"Yinglili, I'm coming in."