Chapter 223
309 Touching ending, Sagiri bursting into tears
Liuli: Who do you think I am? Reality is reality, fiction is fiction! Very few people would like writing that kind of thing, right?
Me: That’s not necessarily the case. Secondary 2 will be returned to Secondary 2, but it doesn’t mean that you have to bring all kinds of complicated terms into it. Just lower the reading threshold. You should understand that more or less people are exposed to otaku culture. Everyone will have this problem. Love of fantasy is also a habit of human beings, so there is a lot of potential for this kind of subject matter. The only difference is how to make it easier for readers to accept it.
Liuli: So it does make a headway, and you can consider incorporating it into my new work.
Liuli: But I already have my own idea. How about you evaluate it first?
Me: Then just send it over.
Hikigaya Hachiman waited for a while and then received the outline written by Ruri.
"This is....."
His expression became a little strange.
The story of daily love does not need to be too complicated, the important thing is the plot arrangement, so he quickly clarified the outline.
The heroine in this story is a good work-study student with a gloomy personality and no friends, but she has some hobbies, that is, reading comics and playing games. She is a mild middle school student, but her pocket money is not enough for her. She was squandering money, so she thought about changing her destiny by drawing comics and writing novels. Unfortunately, she didn't have enough talent, so she was frustrated for a long time.
Until one day, by chance, she discovered that her neighbor was actually a debut light novelist genius, and he also promised to help her become a light novelist, and the resulting romantic comedy... made a grand debut!
how to say? What a strong sense of déjà vu!
Have you seen it somewhere?
Me: There is nothing wrong with the story. If it is written well, it will be very dramatic. Try to highlight the secondary attributes of the heroine and describe it in a cute direction. I feel that this character design can be successful.
Liuli: Although I’m not very good at this, it does sound like a selling point. I might try writing it this way.
"Really? Wouldn't it be enough to just copy your own character?"
Hikigaya Hachiman cursed in his heart.
He continued typing: But I still have a question to ask, shouldn’t the pen name of this actor be called ‘Moonlight is So Beautiful’?
Seeing this, Wu Geng Liuli immediately held her hot cheeks.
Found!
However, this is how it should be.
The girl took half a minute to reply.
"As long as you are willing to authorize it, that's not impossible. 』
"Um?"
Hikigaya Hachiman was stunned and couldn't help but smile.
I originally wanted to tease the other person, but I didn't expect to be teased back.
"That's fine, just do whatever you want. 』
He finally agreed.
I don’t know why, Liuli didn’t reply again.
"ah!!"
On the bed sheet, a curled-up object was rolling around, screaming inexplicably.
"Sister Liuli, don't go crazy at home! There are still people here!"
A voice came from outside the door.
The room became calm again.
It's the weekend.
Hikigaya Hachiman found some time to video chat with Sagiri and sent her the third volume of "Puella Magi Madoka Magica" that he had written.
"Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Sayaka, and Kyoko...!"
When she finished reading the contents of the third volume, Sagiri was so moved that she cried.
Although the previous plot was a bit cruel and uncomfortable, when I watched the end, another emotion took over.
This time, she did not look at her Hachiman brother resentfully for the first time, but kept wiping her tears.
"Kyoko and Sayaka are both good kids, but there's nothing we can do about it. The theme of the story is 'sacrifice'. What you get is what you lose. This is the fate that magical girls will fulfill when they make a wish."
He sighed softly and said with emotion.
"Actually, Brother Hachiman is too evil-minded, right?"
Sagiri stopped moving, then pouted and said deliberately.
"You might as well think so."
He said noncommittally.
The more important something is, the greater the destructive power it will cause after it is lost. For example, the most cherished life can shine even more when it dies as a martyr. In terms of the design of the story from depression to healing, this is Quite an important part.
Although the original script was not what he had in mind, this simple truth is not difficult to understand. He understood it a long time ago.
Of course, if the death is too hasty or too funny, it becomes fun.
"Okay, Brother Hachiman, I'm going to hang up. I'm going to go for a walk to relax and come back to paint."
Sagiri raised her little hand and waved.
The video ends.
Hikigaya Hachiman got off the chair, stretched, and walked into the living room.
Suddenly, the fragrant aroma coming from the kitchen made him stop and go to the kitchen.
Today's little cook is not a fairy, but a village girl. She is dressed in a light pink kimono and apron, which is a bit unusual and beautiful.
"who?"
Qian Shou Cun Zheng, who was making soup, heard the footsteps and turned around, looking delighted.
"Hachiman, are you done talking to Sagiri?"
"Well, that's it. Sagiri cried a lot today."
"Really? It seems that the plot of the third volume is very touching! I'm looking forward to it!"
Putting a hand on his chest, Qian Shou Cun Zheng's eyes were filled with anticipation.
At this time, he originally wanted to say something bad like 'I can give you a spoiler first', but instead he focused on the girl's now much longer hair.
Purple hair, purple eyes, and a more cold temperament are very different from the previous watermelon head image, and the immature facial features have also become more mature.
"Hachiman?"
Qianju Cunzheng noticed his intense gaze and looked away shyly for a moment.
Could it be that Hachiman has already appreciated my beauty?
Although she doesn't want to compare, she thinks that her cuteness is not inferior to others.
But all this time, my sweetheart has rarely been moved by her beauty.
However, a woman will look good to those who please her.
She also wants her sweetheart to be obsessed with her, not only her soul, but her skin as well.
"Although Murazheng's short hair is very attractive, it seems that he looks better with long hair."
Hikigaya Hachiman couldn't help but reach out and lift up a strand of the girl's long hair and hold it in his hand. It felt quite smooth.
More importantly, he was able to confirm that the girl had long hair for him, and he was moved for this reason.
For girls, hair is actually quite sensitive and important, not to mention being rubbed in front of someone like this. The girl's shyness surged like a flood and she lowered her head.
until.
"Is the soup ready?"
"ah!?"
After hearing his sweetheart's reminder, Qianshou Village Zhengxing reacted and quickly turned back to turn off the fire.
310 Don’t worry, it will definitely make you unbearable.
"Cun Zheng, the food you cooked today was better than usual. You are good at cooking. Do you have any tips?"
Kanayu took a few more bites of the dishes, and after tasting the taste, she couldn't help but ask.
To capture a man's heart, you must capture a man's stomach. This can be regarded as a direction for their competition.
After studying hard, she is still far behind others, so she wants to gain experience from others.
"That's because I poured my heart and soul towards Hachiman into the food. Yes, that's 'love'! This is the so-called secret!"
Qian Shou Cun Zheng raised his chest and said solemnly.
"I don't believe it! In terms of love for seniors, no one has a stronger love than me! Huh! I didn't expect you, Cun Zheng, to have learned such a saying. You must have learned it from someone."
But Nayuta shook his head heavily, his long silver hair waving, then he crossed his arms and sneered.
"You said it, don't take me with you!"
Fairy Yamada felt offended and immediately replied.
Then I saw her making small movements with her hands while saying eloquently: "Cooking does require skills, but intention is more important. My mother once told me that she was happiest when she was cooking for her father. At that time, my mother's cooking was delicious, but since my father passed away, it has become very bitter and salty... Later, I hired chefs to cook, so why do I cook better than you all? Eat? Of course it’s because my love is deeper!”
Everyone was very moved when they heard it, until the last sentence was revealed, which instantly broke the atmosphere.
"Cooking skills are cooking skills, don't talk about it so arrogantly."
Qianju Cunzheng calmed down.
"That's not what you said just now Cun Zheng."
Yamada Fairy said with a smile.
Of course, the aspects that are beneficial to you must be exaggerated, and the negative aspects must be eliminated.
The scale of village levy and Nayuta are also very flexible.
"Stop talking and eat well! Some of the dishes are cold and don't taste good."
Hikigaya Hachiman knocked on the table and said with a cold expression.
oh.
The three girls looked embarrassed and responded.
…
Total military high.
Light novel club.
Makishima Saori stood in front of the window, breathing hot air from his mouth, which stained the glass with a layer of mist, making his original mood of looking at the scenery disappear in an instant.
"Do you feel that it has become deserted recently?"
She sat down on the sofa and said suddenly.
"Because it's already winter."
“It’s White Album season.”
Ke'er Nayuta and Wu Geng Liuli replied casually.
Hikigaya Hachiman remained silent, silently scrolling through his phone.
In fact, everyone knew the meaning of her words. It was just that the people who used to come to join in the fun had disappeared. Whether it was Isshiki or Dango, they had not been seen for a long time.
A little lonely.
People are like this. If something exists for a long time, even if you haven't noticed it before, you will become very uncomfortable if it suddenly disappears.
Although this is the case, after all, everyone has reached a consensus before.
Kindness to the enemy is cruelty to oneself. In a place where the fairy lady is not there, it will end up like this.