Chapter 95: Danhui's Relief of the Siege Summary and Thanks
Chapter 95: Danhui's Relief of the Siege Summary and Thanks
Volume 2, sixty chapters, is finished. As usual, let’s talk about the book.
The story of this volume still takes place in the seventh year of Xinchou, but I intentionally introduced the struggles and infighting among various forces, centered around the benefits brought by "anti-inflammatory drugs", one thing after another, paving the way and explaining Qin Huai's meeting with two great masters and obtaining rich rewards.
The second volume mainly adopts this writing style of multiple forces mixed with a little bit of political intrigue, which has benefited me a lot, helped me understand many of my own shortcomings, and also made the future direction of this book much clearer.
In the original outline design, the first volume was the introduction and foreshadowing of the second volume, and the second volume was the foreshadowing and hook of the fifth volume. Before writing, I was not quite sure how effective this plot structure would be.
But it seems to be working well so far? The boss battle in the second volume is well written, but the ending of the two sides fighting for the secret medicine is not well written, it should be more exciting.
This version of the ending is the fourth version. The first three versions have the plot of knife man (Xiang Yihai died, the heroine was seriously injured), the boss battle design is old-fashioned (on the day when Mr. Sun came to Hong Kong, the martial arts champion died, the protagonist and Yu Yang used the ability of Yanfu to delay the King of Hell, and then used CR potion), and the Qing court sent people again (too procrastinated).
So far, none of the main supporting characters have died in the hundred chapters, and there are very few hints and data related to Yanfu as the story goes on. My guess is that this may be because I unconsciously wrote him as a traditional martial arts novel, which does not quite fit the style of a fast-paced infinite flow. I must try a different writing style in the next volume.
Regarding Qin Huai's way of dealing with things in these two volumes, it is mainly because of the different time flow speeds of the fruit and the plot design. It takes some time for the protagonist to accumulate a solid foundation. The last two volumes have no ties or concerns, which will be more in line with the characteristics of the infinite flow protagonist.
The story of Xin Chou Qi, a martial arts hero, ends here for the time being. With one hundred chapters, it can be said that it presents a relatively complete story.
What I want to say in the first volume is that if there are rules, good rules, they must be followed.
What I want to express in the second volume is that when faced with some bad rules that have already harmed the people, if someone stops you from making new rules, then you can no longer tolerate it.
Judging from the feedback from readers, I feel that the writing of these 200,000 words is only about 50% effective, there are many problems, and it will be necessary to make major revisions in the future. But from my current personal ability, I have already played about 70% to 80% of it, and I hope the next volume will be better.
There is nothing much to say, just keep writing. I seldom make promises, everything depends on actions.
The third volume will start tomorrow. Finally, thank you all for your support.
(End of this chapter)